~Regret~ ~Awarded~ **ROTD**
I walked on water with sigils as my gangplank, the curvature of spiny remnants following riveted stares, listening to whispers of madness as my ears ring with breathy moans reverberating endlessly, my...
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Timelessly beautiful, and your poetry is just as special as I remembered it Talitha, wonderfully scripted indeed...Keith.
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I think regret is the one emotion that is most difficult to write about, because it is one of the hardest to face and admit. You write it well in this poem. I especially like this: Grief, the...
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An intensely powerful work, replete with fanciful imagery, ending on:bitterly knowing that I gave it all up for nothing, losing hope on dreams that I never had but I’ve always wanted. Grief, the...
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a mantra for the aged remembering the soft, peach-kill of flesh razor-ripe undertones of fragrant lineage; a seduction of blood versus river. This blows me away, Chris ... profound reflections with...
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This is tied up nicely with a bow on it. I have to agree with Ellen, difficult subject handled like a pro.
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wow - I think this is my favourite from you - one to read again to aborb all its nuances that first line sets the scene and it just continues! marvellous work
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Talitha, you swept me away with outstanding lyrical virtuosity. You write regret in magnificent metaphorical wonder. Superb. John
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There are so many Remarkable lines throughout this Chris, and the closing clutches at the heart like a 200 horsepower vacumnbut this verse... Stumbling, my toe bent on destruction of the torn veil,...
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CR !Whoaaaaaaaa, heavy throughout, but then this is a deep, most heavy purge... still, I was unprepared for that ending. Congrats on the awarding of this remarkable write and extra kudos for a...
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I have nothing to say, Chris ... beyond "WOW". I felt this deeply. I think the ink well is still quite full, keep dipping!
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Powerfully evoking exactly what it promises from the beginning. The write floats in ever tightening bindings until that final choking of dried confession.Beautifully scribed, truly an excellent write...
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Chris, a masterstroke. This feels like an ageless cautionary tale. Dan
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Whooooa -- I feel a deep soul-seaching went into this fine creation, delivered clearly to the understanding of "Regret" and what's beyond it, and this part will linger on for a while the ebb and...
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*speechless here Two Words *Standing Ovation* well maybe three ***Congratulations*** ***Thunderous Clapping***
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I agree with everyone's thoughts on this beautifully written poem, enjoyed reading very much
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Congrats on Steph's Read of the Day Chris, Big Time Deserving *****Clapping***** Bri~
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